This poem, (215) is really interesting because the title suggests a parent saying goodbye to a daughter leaving her childhood behind to go to college or get her own place, but the subject of the poem is about a parent watching his or her daughter learn to ride her bike. The author uses lines purely about bicycle riding to suggest something completely different. In fact, this is a good example of how to do our journey poems from earlier this year. The poem is full of metaphor, and never directly mentions a child leaving home, except in the title. Pastan, (the author), certainly did a better job than I did with it. "I kept waiting for the thud of your crash as I sprinted to catch up, while you grew smaller, more breakable with distance" After reading the title, this is easily relatable to a parent fearing for their child as they become more independent and leave home. The parent can hardly believe that they could make it on their own, waiting for them to fall. But clearly, the child is competent and happy. "pumping for your life, screaming with laughter, the hair flapping behind you like a hankerchief waving goodbye."
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